I'm going somewhere here, but I don't know quite where.

[amolitor]

 

[jenko]

Love the lighting.

As a stand-alone image, I'd crop it. I like the "ghosts" in the background, but they are just not interesting enough to carry the top part of the frame.

The only exception would be if you had a series of these shots with tons of dead space, and the objects constructed a sort of narrative or borrowed from a pre-existing one.

 

[DarkShadow]

I think this is cool. Very Good focus.

 

[jman6785]

i also like it. if it was color it would be ehh but black and white good job buddy

 

[wyogirl]

nailed it... sorry, I had to.:mrgreen:

 

[timor]

View attachment 55789 [h=2]I'm going somewhere here, but I don't know quite where.[/h]

I have here baaaad feelings.:mrgreen:

 

[Derrel]

Ahhhh, screw it all, amolitor! I mean,who knows where you're headed!

 

[peter27]

So you bought a new cupboard at a DIY store and after putting it together this screw was left over, right?

 

[ceeboy14]

A neutral surface for the screw or one which would support where a screw might be used would have been infinitely better. Too much going on after the lighting and composition to keep my attention. Screwed up on this one, me thinks.

 

[sashbar]

I am afraid you are going to hit the wall here.

 

[KenC]

I suppose it could be the start of a "fastener" series. I tend to agree with the earlier post about the "ghosts" in the shadows not quite working. I think you may be close to something here but you need to do more with the background.

 

[Derrel]

Ohhhhhhhh, a fastener series! As Austin Powers says, "Yeah baby, yeah!!" Imagine the possibilities as amolitor prowls the aisles of Home Depot....nails...galvanized nails...titanium-tipped nails ...roofing nails...oh, just the nails alone makes me feel weak in the knees. Then there are all the staples and such! staples_zinc_diamond_pt.jpg Not to mention all the screws! Both tamper-resistant and standard head types. The whole fastener field seems just ripe for a series of photos!

Types of fasteners - Google Search

 

[timor]

Types of fasteners - Google Search

It's gonna be a looooong ride... I am OK with that.

 

[Rick50]

I think I like your effort here. It would be much better with a stronger subject but the composition sure carries it.

 

[pgriz]

Just let's hope it wasn't sitting on a chair... in the "before" image.