im new trying to get better some pics C&C please

[classicsrtheway2go]

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3. & 4. (which one is better)
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[burstintoflame81]

I would crop #1 tighter. Too much sky up top. Not liking the shadow on her face either.

2) Pretty decent.

I like 3 better than 4 but don't really care for either really. Would have been better with a wide fast lens to get a good depth of field maybe?

 

[Alter_Ego]

I like number 2.

Also the illusion in number 4 that the floor is actually a trampoline is pretty cool too only the rest of the editing isnt too good.

Im new too and as a beginner i would say you have really good shots not sure what the pros would say.

 

[vtf]

I like most of the photos, here are the things I see.
#1 her hand hides half her smile, but good pic to me . Crop tighter.
#2 Looks good, maybe alittle over-exposed at the front.
#3 Background is distracting to me especially the 2nd child.
#4 Just can't get myself to like, sorry.
Keep at it, looking forward to seeing more.