It has a nice minimalist feel to it. The only thing that bothers me is that green blob in the lower left corner. I'd desaturate it or just crop the left side to get rid of it.
Carol, consider upping the sharpness and the saturation. I tried it with some of my "impressionistic" shots and I liked the effect. Of course, it's all related to taste, so maybe you'll love it, maybe you'll hate it.
I like the idea and have played around with this type thing myself a couple of times (rain, poppies in the grass); I've done it giving the camera a quick brief twist of the wrist to create movement. I find it tricky to get some illusion of movement but not too much blur etc. - challenging I think! but fun to try.
I think your take on it is spot on Carol. I like it but maybe it needs a bit more clarity. I wonder how it would have looked as a vertical? maybe give a little more sense of the trees and not in quite so close.
I think it's awesome. Never seen that done before. Very nice.