I like the premise of the shot very much but I found my eye being drawn to the middle of the right side flower and pretty much stopping there because that brightness captured all my attention. In my edit, I diminished that brightness by about 12% and increased the brightness on the stamens on the left flower by about the same amount thus creating a more visual flow from one side to the other, a bit of a modulated "S" curve. However, I found my edit didn't work as well in a square format as in a rectangular one so I cropped accordingly to better emphasize the narrative of the light. It's just a thought.