In the Alps...

Rizsavi

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Definitely interesting, but I think the composition has a few small hitches. First, I can't help but feel that the shot needs more left, and less right. You've got half of a house and tree over on the right, and its distracting. You have some great opportunity in using leading lines with the train tracks below, but I don't feel they were used to the fullest extent here. Should be worth a reshoot though, you've got some great potential in this shot. Perhaps even a nightshot with plenty of moody clouds or stars and the train passing by.

On a separate note, you may want to either size down your watermark, or perhaps keep its placement consistent between photos, else we think your more interested in advertising your name on the forums instead of actually taking photos ;)
 

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