Not sure if this is a stand alone image. What you are trying to say is not clear. Maybe if it was part of a series or maybe if it even had a caption. Right now I just see a dramatic guy in some dramatic light. Tell us about the client and tell us about the shoot.
Certainly is pretty dramatic. For these shots, I always enjoy the ones that are just of the person's head. Seeing clothing with whatever labels they might have sort of lessons the effect in my opinion. I think a plain shirt would've worked better, maybe.