In water

[cvbikeguy]

thoughts?

 

[EIngerson]

Cool picture, but seems underexposed to me.

 

[redessa]

Water? Aside from the few inky looking ripples at her hip, it's too dark to see that she's supposed to be in water.

 

[Holydeath]

Why is the water black lol? A pool of ink? Other than that, it's not a bad picture.

 

[tirediron]

I think there's a lot of potential, but as has already been alluded to, your exposure needs work. At the very least, a couple of large reflectors to bring some detail into her top and the foreground water. Ideally 2-3 strobes to even out the exposure and reduce dynamic range.

 

[gsgary]

It needs light can hardly tell she is stood in water

 

[cvbikeguy]

mm i didnt noticed the water part till after the post. here is a sample of how this edit changed.

thanks for the critiques