I think there needs to be more floor in the foreground. Seems like your aimed a touch too high with your wide angle and it wrecks the composition a bit.
The HDR treatment (?) gives the photo a blur which is not unpleasant, but I think a crisper shot would be more effective.
I might have tried to set the black point darker, but that's a matter of taste. Even so, the slight lack of contrast combined with the HDR blur enhances the overall fuzziness and lack of "pop".