Intercity photo shoot C&C

[redtippmann]

Yesterday I went on a photoshoot with an up and comming music artist. MM CODE: #1343243 It was really cold so we had to run through the shoot quickly because he was getting too cold. But I think it went well.

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Thanks for looking! ANY C&C is greatly appreciated! (Don't hold back I can take it)

 

[tevo]

composition is kinda simplistic and repetative, but it is understated which i like. great pictures

 

[misstwinklytoes]

well.... mayyybbeeee if he'd put some clothes on! Like one of those big puffy jackets? Just kiddin'... kinda.

Seriously though based off your profile pic and the pics of this dude. If I'd seen you two out there w/o camera I'd have stopped to ask you if you were alright. Guy looks kinda tough.

1. neat I like, blown, but I think it works.

2. crooked and just kinda makes me go meh.

3. great except i find the leaf distracting

4. one of my favs

5. he looks cold

6. he still looks cold

7. his chest looks very big and his waist looks very small. weird.

8. my fav by far

good job.

 

[tevo]

Seriously though based off your profile pic and the pics of this dude. If I'd seen you two out there w/o camera I'd have stopped to ask you if you were alright. Guy looks kinda tough.

:lmao:

 

[Blake.Oney]

Number 2 is my favorite. I think if you made the ambient light more under exposed to where you'd have this shot with him well lit with ocf and everything darker (not too dark, but darker) it would look awesome.

 

[redtippmann]

I tried to do a little of that... But any more woud be too strobist for my taste.

 

[JenLavazza]

I think they look very professional!! The only little thing I noticed is the tip of his nose is pinkish in #1...possibly due to the cold? Other than that....GREAT WORK!!

 

[Ub3rdoRK]

I think the tilted horizon adds to it but i feel it needs to be more dramatic or straight. The lighting is great. Background with the tagging could be maybe a little farther away and a little blurred maybe? I do like them though great job.