Is the left eye area too cool and dark?

SoulfulRecover · Aug 21, 2012

#1

and if so how can I fix that? or would someone on here want to do it for me? :mrgreen:

any other critique is more than welcome too!!

Edit: Another photo

#2

Untitled by SoulfulRecover, on Flickr

binga63 · Aug 21, 2012

Just a noob... but yes there does seem to be a difference that stands out... sorry no ideas on how to fix...she has gorgeous eyes....

SoulfulRecover · Aug 21, 2012

binga63 said:
Just a noob... but yes there does seem to be a difference that stands out... sorry no ideas on how to fix...she has gorgeous eyes....

Thank you, I figured it was quite noticeable. I loaded up another photo I think is better but I dont think I like the amount she tilted her head. Also noticed the other photo was rather dark over all.

amolitor · Aug 22, 2012

Do you mean her left, or frame left?

The first photo is better, in my opinion. The eyes appear shaded, because they are shaded. In the second one, they do not appear shaded, even though they are shaded. That looks rather odd.

Frequency · Aug 22, 2012

Such beautiful eyes.... two different expressions...eyes are the most expressive part on face, so to say....
I like both
there is more innocence in the second than in the first.... i am a bit disturbed by that lace touching her left eye, that is eye on the right side

SoulfulRecover · Aug 22, 2012

amolitor said:
Do you mean her left, or frame left?

The first photo is better, in my opinion. The eyes appear shaded, because they are shaded. In the second one, they do not appear shaded, even though they are shaded. That looks rather odd.

her left, frame right in photo #1. You dont think the photo is a little dark?

this may end up being another "lets re-do it"

BKSPicture · Aug 24, 2012

The secound one don't work for me becouse it don't looks natural with just the face part a lot brigher then the cloth.
If you made the cloth covering the mouth brigher as well I whink it would work better.

Nice picture though.