Its been a while (colors)

edtek

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its been quite a while since ive been on here (year actually) but i feel ive been rusty but that why i need some critque on my work!
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1. looks a bit blurred to me and compositionally I don't think it works. I'd have liked to have seen the pencils a bit more even I think

2 is ok but lacks a bit of interest for me

3 Meh, looks a bit warm but exposure is ok. Looks like a cool place to hang out.

4 IMO your strongest shot here, it's nice but her feet look a little too blue but the skintones at the back are good. I like the composition too

5 Nice, but the bee centered in the frame makes it a bit static for my liking. There's also quite a bit of dead space at the top and I think I would have preferred a more natural background
 
I like things in the center don't believe other people do what you think works ;-) All your photos are well done and the only thing that matters is that you like them.
 
i really thank you guys! ive been out of the loop for a while! the one with the bumble bee was not modified as far as background goes!
 
The first is really too blurry to be a technically "correct" shot, but not blurry enough to be impressionistic. I do like the colors though.

And I like the bee shot as well, but I feel that it would look better with a closer crop to get rid of some of that empty space on top.
 

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