Kali the biker chick C&C most welcome

[SoulfulRecover]

Went out for a quick shoot with the bike today. I have another photo but I think it may be considered NSFW. You cant see anything but since I am unsure, I figured it was best not to post it here. If you wish to see it, please feel free to check my Flickr.

Anyway, I would love some feed back

I think the main thing I noticed was that my DoF was too shallow.

 

[TATTRAT]

I prefer the one that you think may be NSFW (borderline nsfw, imo), and not for the obvious reasons of her being topless, I think it is a sharper shot, and looks better. While I like the shot above, it seems like the focus trailed off, and her face isn't as crisp as the other. I think the DOF is pretty ok too. Good looking girl, shame the bike wasn't detailed, that's the main reason I went with black heat wrap. . .the white just gets so damn grungy.

 

[SoulfulRecover]

Thanks for taking the time to look at both photos. I appreciate that. If I didnt daily ride the bike and was able to garage it (I live in an apartment) Id be much more willing to get the bike detailed up. It had black heat wrap previously but it had faded to purple/white so I figured I would give the natural color a try.

I will have to keep an eye on my DoF better next time.

 

[SoulfulRecover]

anyone else want to tear this apart?

 

[clipse]

I like it but I agree that the other picture is sharper and more appealing......for the sharpness.

I have very very few pictures that I was happy with while shooting at 1.8. These I would be thrilled with though.

I like both pictures a lot though.

 

[DiskoJoe]

The other shot was better. :thumbup:

 

[DiskoJoe]

I like it but I agree that the other picture is sharper and more appealing......for the sharpness.

I have very very few pictures that I was happy with while shooting at 1.8. These I would be thrilled with though.

I like both pictures a lot though.

Last time I checked sharpness was not synonymous with topless.

 

[Pallycow]

I too like the other image better, to me, it is certainly safe to post.

I like it because it is shot better, more in focus, and looks more relaxed/natural. On this shot above, she seems a bit tense...not at ease like in the other one.

 

[Pallycow]

oh, I'm confused as well, why is it so noisey?

 

[SoulfulRecover]

are you talking about the other shot? Ill just go ahead and post it. If it needs to be removed I understand.



not so sure about the noise. I may have bumped something in PP or over looked something. Ill see if I can clean it up tomorrow since I have the day off. Thank you for pointing that out

and thank you all for your feed back :thumbup:

 

[Pallycow]

yeah, I was confused as the iso was only at 100 and you used a 50mil...so ya must've done somethin

 

[TATTRAT]

are you talking about the other shot? Ill just go ahead and post it. If it needs to be removed I understand.

Yes. Much nicer, imo. Great shape on her, and the shot is a LOT more sharp.

 

[OrbitalJosh]

Great shots, how'd you get a girl to pose topless on a bike like that, good work!

 

[runnah]

I am so getting a motorcycle...

 

[BobSaget]

Totally sfw. The gas tank counts as a top