Katie Girl

[sandys13]

any opinion??

 

[tirediron]

Welome to TPF!

Opinions per req:

1. Just a little bit hot, and I think your key needs to move a bit more to one side or the other. I prefer a less tightly composed image, but that's a personal thing.

2. Not bad; a little more contrast in the lighting and a bit more DOF wouldn't go amis.

3. Blue is almost NEVER a good colour for skin!

4. Not fond of the very OOF hand and flower in the foreground.

I think you've got some good potential with these, but perhaps a little more tweaking in post?

Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

~John

 

[sandys13]

thank you

 

[sandys13]

something else. c&c welcome





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[Michael79]

This is for the last set, you have an adorable model! Her hair is oof on the left side of the first pic. Same thing going with the 3rd pic. I do like the second pic.

Welcome to TPF, I think you'll like it here.

 

[sandys13]

thanks for your opinion, hair at the 5 is orginal but at the no. 7 i tried to make it kind of blur.

 

[sandys13]

i'm curious what do you think about this one?
I'm trying to work with lightroom, but it is only small beginning.

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[paigew]

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[sandys13]

thanks, for this I like it a bit darker like you did as well.