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[lauratuttle73]

This shoot was lit naturally, through the ceiling windows.

Feedback is appreciated.

 

[DiskoJoe]

Her face is a bit out of focus and the veg is a bit distracting with all the relly big leaves in front of her. You should have zoomed in a bit closer on her. Purse is distracting too. Pose is unnatural and feels awkward. Feet are too close together.

 

[Big Mike]

Is that the Muttart?

If it's an ad for the location, the composition would be understandable. But as a fashion/editorial shot, the model is way too small in the overall size of the image. If the intention is just to show a pretty girl in amongst the foliage, you don't need such a wide view to do that. Cropping in much closer to the model would still give that impression to the viewer, but the model becomes more important and impactful to the shot.