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[bribrius]

 

[oldhippy]

Great idea. I might have cropped the bottom, to the point of the V . The lower part of the building draws my eye away from the primary subject.

 

[bribrius]

Great idea. I might have cropped the bottom, to the point of the V . The lower part of the building draws my eye away from the primary subject.

thanks, im going to think about this. in some ways I think it is more balanced and like it better, in another I wonder if there is too much white and loses some effect.

 

[Fred Berg]

It feels like the facade is a very important aspect of the photo, so the original crop is more interesting for me. I also prefer its composition.

 

[Derrel]

I think images like this need a border, or a darker-colored matte, to contain them; all that white at the top just blends into the TPF default background, and lessens the impact of the image. A bit of clockwise rotation would also strengthen this shot.

 

[bribrius]

I think images like this need a border, or a darker-colored matte, to contain them; all that white at the top just blends into the TPF default background, and lessens the impact of the image. A bit of clockwise rotation would also strengthen this shot.

didn't even occur to me thanks.

 

[bribrius]

aint so sure I like that extra tilt .....

 

[BrickHouse]

That's a nice shot Bribrius

 

[KenC]

The edit looks great. I might have allowed the wall on the right to slope in just a little, but just a matter of taste really.

 

[kdthomas]

I like this edit better as well ... do you think we could shop out the jet contrail?

 

[bribrius]

I like this edit better as well ... do you think we could shop out the jet contrail?

I don't burn or shop

 

[Derrel]

The borders really help elevate this shot! And yes, I agree--maybe allowing the right-hand wall to tilt in a bit does help it, so you and KenC might very well be right. Now that I've seen it bordered and straightened, I think the angles on the left side building look worse, so I'd split the difference on the overall tilt, and it'll be pretty good.

 

[bribrius]

The borders really help elevate this shot! And yes, I agree--maybe allowing the right-hand wall to tilt in a bit does help it, so you and KenC might very well be right. Now that I've seen it bordered and straightened, I think the angles on the left side building look worse, so I'd split the difference on the overall tilt, and it'll be pretty good.

thanks Derrel!