I see two different images here: (1) the black things in the lower half of the frame, and (2) the complicated figure in the upper right. It would be better to frame either one but not both, and if you decide you really want both, don't cut off part of the upper right figure. To me the most interesting shot would be the right 1/3 of the frame plus a little more on top and the right. Abstracts are pretty subjective stuff, so you'll always get a variety of opinions/suggestions, so this is just my take on it. Keep shooting!