You have exposure on them. I am not sure what you are looking for. If you are asking if you got the technique, you did. The images themselves are kind of... well... there's not a composition or story or anything. They remind me of some shots my grand daughter got when she was playing with one of my cameras.
Now that...that's some C&C there, MLeeK...but then again, those are sure some photos there, james...uh...yeah...so, uh, what kind of light is/was this? What you Brits call a torch? How long are these exposures?