Lillie 11 months old

[PWhite214]

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My grand daughter

Phil

 

[NedM]

Great photo, but I feel like the lighting is in wrong place or maybe you're missing a key light.

 

[The_Traveler]

underlit, the dark side too dark and the framing is a bit off, imo.
You will get better and more useful help if you allow editing.

 

[PWhite214]

Thank you for the comments. I changed the edit function.

Phil

 

[Ysarex88 82]

Lovely granddaughter. I'm still waiting for mine and startin' to get a little impatient.

You need more exposure overall and lots more fill on the left side of her face. Given how bright her sleeve is relative to her face you may have the light a bit close.

Here's a quick brush-up in Photoshop. Could lift those shadows better if you have a raw file.

Joe

 

[PWhite214]

Thank you all. The right flash was surely too far away or the level setting too low. I will keep trying.

Phil