Lines and Curves

[invisible]

One of my adventures in abstract...



D70s, f/2.8 @ 16 mm, 1/200, ISO 200.

Thanks for looking.

 

[rufus5150]

Abstract? That looks pretty concrete.

(I'm sooo sorry)

Nice lines/angles. I think it could use a bit more contrast, though. There seems to be a lack of shadow that puts the whole image into a very narrow tonal range.

 

[Rere]

I agree with the last poster--try more contrast. Have you played around with Curves in Photoshop? You may also want to try different types of cropping. But nice lines and angles.

 

[Flower Child]

i find it very interesting. a nice one to add to your collection i think.

 

[ernie]

i think the post-processing on the metal bars is just right, i don't think it needs any more contrast. not really a fan of the composition though, but that's just me.

 

[invisible]

Thanks for your comments, guys and gals. This is the best post-processing job I could do (needless to say, my PP skills are very limited). I'm more than willing to send the original RAW file to whoever wants to take a stab at it. Just let me know.

 

[stsinner]

It has a nice 3-D feel on my monitor..

 

[Al-Wazeer]

i like it!

beautiful but you need to add contrast just a little

 

[Al-Wazeer]

i made some editing:

 

[Wyjid]

i like the original. but could i get a copy to play around with?

 

[invisible]

i like the original. but could i get a copy to play around with?

Thanks Wyjid. Please PM me your email address and I'll send you the RAW file right away.

Thanks stsinner and Al-Wazeer! A-W, I like the added contrast in your edit, but now the image looks like out of a comic book

 

[Wyjid]

here you go, long time in coming.

 

[kerryjim42]

its looking good..nice shape..

 

[ValDR]

I like the treatment on the original post. Great done.

For the rest...well, finding the subject of this is quite hard for me.

 

[invisible]

Thanks Matt, your edit looks really good! Totally different than mine. Can I ask you to email me the .psd file (or a higher res jpg file)?