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One of my adventures in abstract...



D70s, f/2.8 @ 16 mm, 1/200, ISO 200.

Thanks for looking.
 
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Abstract? That looks pretty concrete.

(I'm sooo sorry)

Nice lines/angles. I think it could use a bit more contrast, though. There seems to be a lack of shadow that puts the whole image into a very narrow tonal range.
 

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i think the post-processing on the metal bars is just right, i don't think it needs any more contrast. not really a fan of the composition though, but that's just me.
 
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Thanks for your comments, guys and gals. This is the best post-processing job I could do (needless to say, my PP skills are very limited). I'm more than willing to send the original RAW file to whoever wants to take a stab at it. Just let me know.
 

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It has a nice 3-D feel on my monitor..
 

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i made some editing:
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i like the original. but could i get a copy to play around with?
Thanks Wyjid. Please PM me your email address and I'll send you the RAW file right away.

Thanks stsinner and Al-Wazeer! A-W, I like the added contrast in your edit, but now the image looks like out of a comic book :)
 

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I like the treatment on the original post. Great done.

For the rest...well, finding the subject of this is quite hard for me.
 
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Thanks Matt, your edit looks really good! Totally different than mine. Can I ask you to email me the .psd file (or a higher res jpg file)?
 

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