Lines and Curves

[daithi33]

Good idea for an abstract - nice perspective.

I think its cropped a little tight though. If you gave the bar a little more room to breathe at the sides it would help the overall composition imo.

daithi

 

[Marc Kurth]

I'm always hesitant to comment about processing because of my lack of skill - but.....

The original image looks to like you used a lot of shadow recovery and flattened it out way too much. I would like to see the original straight from the camera to play with.

Marc