I find it boring. You have filled the frame with a subject that has no connection to the viewer. Plainly put, it is the back of someones head. There is no emotion in the photo.
Yes, the colors are bright, and no, it does not look soft on my screen. Those two things are not enough to make me look at it for more than 2 seconds and move on. Give us something to look at.
Do you have any other photos taken of the model that day?
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