Love

[x-man]

The following photo is my photo class homework. Title: Love

Please give me some comment. Thank!

 

[The_Traveler]

IMO, the whitepoint needs to be reset using levels.
the name and location are really distracting

 

[JenR]

I think the mother and child should be sharp. You are showing the mother's love for her child, right? It really bothers me that the swing and kid are so very OOF.

~jen

 

[x-man]

I modify lighting and add sharp. I think this is better

 

[x-man]

I think the mother and child should be sharp. You are showing the mother's love for her child, right? It really bothers me that the swing and kid are so very OOF.

~jen

Hi JenR:

You right! I only sharp on mother, because I want people look at the mother first!

 

[The_Traveler]

I think that, to concentrate attention on mother, you should decrease the brightness of the links on the chain, they are very distracting.

 

[DeepSpring]

I like the second version. I wish the kid was a tiny bit sharper tho

 

[x-man]

I like the second version. I wish the kid was a tiny bit sharper tho

Hi DeepSpring:

I hope so too. but that day is very cloudy, no much more light. my speed is 1/100. still not sharp on kid. too bad!

 

[JimmyJaceyMom]

well I like it.. I know when things are in motion its hard to get them into focus. But I do agree about the bright swing links.