Sorry but this photo doesnt do much for me. I dont see where there would of been a big dynamic range that would of called for an HDR. Can you post your original image?
It looks like it was at dusk, so the sky should not have been blown out too much. And the lack of interesting light or cloud formations in the sky (which is what I use HDR to bring out) is not there.
Composition wise, I would of tried to get higher up so you have more of an angled down shot and not have that foreground element there. Maybe focus on a "suburbia at dusk" style shot.