Mandi

[Rick50]

Maybe it's just me but I'm not a fan of the window in the back for the 1st 2 shots. My eye just goes to the window.
Of course the girls are awesome and you did awesome work again but that's my only complaint.

 

[littlepenguin]

Execution is pretty bang on. My critique is mainly content driven / nit-picking:
-2nd image: Her head seems closer to the camera than her hip, and it throws off her proportions. Makes her torso look too short compared to her legs.
-3rd image: Nice red rim camera left and fill camera right. Note that when you subject's eyes cross over the nose, it often makes one eye look much bigger than the other.