Maryknoll Convent School - Childrens Playground

IMO -- I like these shots they are interesting to me. I love the color. 3rd one is interesting perspective.

To me the second is a great abstract. AND I love the girl in the first one, I would take out that shadow to my left of the girl its distracting to me.
 
These are interesting ideas but, IMO, they aren't fully realized as pictures.
Each one is a little short of the ideal.

In #1, the shadow to the left s distracting and the tip of the diagram shouldn't be clipped.

#2 is all design but the two side ribs aren't complete and thus spoil the design the design (+ the blank end of the center rib)

#3 - this would be great if the sun or the moon was in the opposite corner to balance the man-made orb.


They are interesting but fall a little short of what they could be.

Lew
 

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