Looks alright to me.
Only thing would be to change the pose up a bit, your feet are the same almost in both photos.
And the table looks a little slanted to the right.
Something about the perspective that doesn´t look quite right...maybe only cos I´ve looked at it pretty hard for faults...
The left vertical looks ok, but the right leans in towards the top, yet both small pictures on the wall look straight (were they also added later?)
Maybe really cool would be if you could get a big pot of popcorn into the middle and manage to have them sharing it
Take 2 photos from the same perspective as the one above.
In the first one have yourself holding a big bucket of popcorn and laughing, in the other, have yourself giving the finger in a rage about the popcorn being bogarted.