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He doesn't at all look like a Binga. I've seen Bingas in the wild alleyways of the city; they're much taller, lithe, and always on the move prowling about for the wild doughnut or savory French toasts which lurk among wayward pedestrians. Nope, don't know who he is inpersonating, but a Binga...no way!
I like the gritty look, especially on the stair tread and riser edges. I would like to see you lighten up the right side of your face ever so slightly as well as the area between your right elbow and right ribcage. Other that, oh false Binga, good shot of someone.
So, indeed, you may actually be what you are laying claim toward.Very nice. I like the composition a lot. Lots of good stuff to look at, an interesting location, a good position in the frame albeit a non-traditional (looking to the right out of the frame, rather than "across" the frame or however the portrait purists describe it).
What I am not getting here is a couple of things:
- this feels like an "environmental portrait" in terms of its look and framing, but I am not feeling that it's your environment, it feels like you just picked this place to sit down.
- your position in the frame, right of center, turned to look to the right and out of frame is a visual statement with some power, but I am not feeling any why to it. It feels like your energy is directed out of the frame, and away.
These might actually be the same thing. You don't "fit" in the frame for me. Visually, all is fine, it works great. Emotionally or psychologically or something, you and the frame are not quite working together, somehow. For me.
That's probably all a bunch of ********, but maybe you can find something you can use in there?
That's as it should be. If you become "satisfied" you will stop being creative. Keep searching, keep experimenting, keep posting!...I'll keep trying and submitting. Even then I doubt that I will be satified
I like that you used an area instead of just a head shot, or typical portrait. Putting yourself into a scene works well, especially in this black and white. Did you shoot any of yourself looking a little more straight ahead?
