Melanie

craig · Apr 18, 2006

The elusive Meldoll photographed closing day at the Village. I am not to jazzed about this one. Her partial eye is distracting. Not crazy about her teeth either. She really likes this one. Let me know what you think

Nikon E5200 4.9. Focal length 23.4 mm. ISO 64

DepthAfield · Apr 18, 2006

A pretty girl caught in an unfortunate pose Time for a re-shoot if possible.

Oldfireguy · Apr 18, 2006

If she likes it so be it but all I see is teeth and chin. I agree on a re-shoot.

danalec99 · Apr 18, 2006

I'd reduce the highlights and play with the contrast and saturation.

Which 'Village', if I may ask?

Alison · Apr 18, 2006

I've got to agree, I don't think it's the most flattering photo, but if she likes it that's what counts! I generally try not to shoot with anything less than my 50mm for portraits.

darin3200 · Apr 18, 2006

Focus on the eyes.

craig · Apr 19, 2006

Thanks gang! A reshoot is out of the question. This was closing day at the Jackson Hole Mountain Resort (The Village). I posted it because it is candid to me. My work is so not candid. I want to explore it further. Should also mention that we were making rather merry at this point.