Melinda

[KevinD]

Melinda's first shoot.

 

[AnotherNewGuy]

#4 is the best.

In #1, you chose a poor angle with that tree in the background. Her hair would have glistened with the back light.

#5 scares me. lol.

I think the composition was pretty good in most of them. Exposure was pretty good as well. I usually like catchlights but I am guessing that they wouldn't really fit with the darkness of these images.

 

[ocular]

#2 is your best and 3 is ok. The rest are dreadful, like AnotherNewGuy said not enough light falling on her face.