Good setting and concept, but the outdoors part is too overexposed for me, although I recognize that this is a subjective judgment. It should be the brightest part of the image, but this is just a little too far, IMO. If you want to tone it down, and if there is some detail there in the raw file, the best way to go is to process the raw file twice, once for the bright area and once for everything else and then combine. Actually you would only need to process for the bright area because the rest looks good. Just my two cents ...