Model Jessica

[Guinness Man]

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[Robin Usagani]

Nice

 

[o hey tyler]

1 is pretty nice. 2 is waaaaaaaaaaaaay too flashed IMO. Needs more balance between flash and ambient.

 

[Trever1t]

Nicely done :thumbup:

 

[fokker]

Very well done. my only complaint with #2 is that it looks as though she might be about to fall over sideways.

 

[Vtec44]

Very nice!!! I like the lighting in #1 and agree that 2 has too much flash, on top of tilted horizon and cropping at the knees.

 

[Alan_Chapman]

Nice

 

[arkipix1001]

great shots though i prefer no.1 than the other...

 

[Derrel]

#1 looks very good, but as others have mentioned, there are some issues with #2, such as the flash-to-ambient ratio, which looks pretty fly by the seat of the pants, and as mentioned, she appears to be tipping over. I would love to see #2 with the flash power brought down, or just have the exposure on her pulled downward in post.

 

[FSJeffo]

I like #1 best, but prefer the pose in #2... Great shots, beautiful gal.

JM

 

[Guinness Man]

thanks everyone. I agree with too much flash. It was like Hey look! the sunset looks great lets shoot it! and if youve shot them before you dont have much time before you lose it. lol