Model shoot : kelly helmer, C&C welcome Please

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[jbmaster]

well, your background is kinda strange. The lighting on 2 is a bad choice. But, your close-ups are pretty good. On her and your other post, Jenny.

 

[Derrel]

Your lighting setups could benefit from some refinement. Poses 1 and 2 have highlights that are pretty blown out. A bit of fill light would really help those two shots.

 

[Ady]

#3 Is stunning.
Light on #2 & #4 not to my taste
#5 I want to see her stunning eyes
#1 Nice body shape but head looks slightly awkward & background a little too cluttered

 

[DanFinePhotography]

#5 is good, if the eyes were wide open it would have been GREAT

 

[bartystewart]

I dont like the angle of her neck and face in #1. Looks a little awkward.

I agree with the comment to use more fill as well.

Thanks,
Dan

 

[TH.photo]

thank you for all the C&C

 

[tommetass]

Of all of these... Nr. 2 is actually the one who really stands out!

It has intense lighting which makes really gritty. Almost like a gritty 35mm print.
I really like it!

But, I'm not sure if it was that intentional...?


The other ones are either too flat or too much backlight