You did great.
Things I would look at. In 1 and 7, when you center someone in the frame in a symmetrical background, make sure that both the model and YOURSELF are perfectly centered and symmetrical, you were slightly off center in both shots. In Number 6, looks like all available light, if would have benefited from a reflector to soften but NOT eliminate the shadows on her face
Light in 1 & 2 is plesant but lacks a little punch, too flat, but pleasant