Molly b & w

[wgoode]

 

[mmaria]

- I just love horizontal portraits but in this instance not so much
- I think you look good
- your eyes are oversharpened
- your right shoulder looks a way bigger then it should
- vignette is too heavy
- of course this is jmho
- guys here will completely disagree with me
- welcome to the forum

 

[wgoode]

I kinda thought the same thing on the right shoulder...but thats totally my fault. I had her sitting with her knees up and her arms were wrapped around her knees. I just came in for a close one and liked the way it ended up.

 

[mmaria]

seeing your avatar, I thought that this is a selfie

 

[timor]

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- guys here will completely disagree with me

Why ?
It's a good critique. The only thing is I would add a bit of depth to the face with a reflector from below to emphasize the chin a bit better.

 

[wgoode]

seeing your avatar, I thought that this is a selfie

Its actually the love of my life.....my wife Molly.