My monitor is fine. There's very little shadow, just light shade in this. Everything is wide open. The greens feel a little too yellow to me, as well, and the whole thing is bright and poppy.
Now, it's been a few years since I lived in OR, but I remember that things are wildly green and lush, but that bright yellowish green tone reads wrong to me. I remember is as a darker, more somber tone. Possibly because it's raining all the damn time, and maybe it DOES look like that on a sunny day.
Anyways. Normally I tell people to dial the damn contrast down, but for a dramatic shot like this you want the tonal drama.
- pulled most of the tones down with a curve adjustment, except the highest ones
- desaturate a hair
- color balance -yellow/+blue until I liked the fir tree on top of the cliff
ETA: Note perfect balance of tonality and drama and also that unpopular is both dumb and blind! <-- no smiley, but that's a joke, 'kay?