My daughter in winter..brrrr.. C&C PLEASE

tmjjk · Jan 23, 2013

My biggest problem with the image is her angle. Her right arm... I should have had her turn a little more towards me. It was hard enough to get her to do this confident pose. You should have seen the awkward pose before this one... sheesh. If these young girls would just realize how beautiful they are...

jowensphoto · Jan 23, 2013

I see what you mean about the arm, it looks a little... jello-y. Turning more toward you, or even if you took a step and a half to the left would have helped that.

The title, especially the "burr" part, doesn't fit the image. That was the first thing that I noticed. She has short sleeves on! That ruins the feeling of cold and winter, even with snow on the ground. Get her bundled up in a coat and hat to give more "winter effect."

Otherwise, it's a decent photo and you have a very pretty daughter!

tmjjk · Jan 23, 2013

Thanks...the brrr was referring to her coat being off...she was freezing lol. But I get what you are saying, I normally don't put much effort into titles. I will pay more attention to that.

tmjjk · Jan 23, 2013

And I will do a coat and scarf image too

jowensphoto · Jan 23, 2013

Oooooh okay. That makes sense.

I know what you mean about titles. This is exactly why I never title anything... can never figure out anything appropriate/matching.

Can't wait to see the next shots

Derrel · Jan 23, 2013

That's not snow...some of the grass is still visible!!! lol

She looks very cute, very wholesome. She has a very nice hairstyle!!! And yeah, the shirt and yoga-type pants don't seem too "wintery". The background, with that skinny tree trunk and all those scraggly branches seems a bit too "competing"...it takes the focus off of her...maybe with MUCH shallower depth oif field, you could have managed to sublimate some of the backgroud details...but sticks in front of snow...really is a high-attention background.

OTOH, your use of the natural light is pretty good.