My Daughter :)

[Snyder462]

bored cold day i just started back taking photos after a bump in lifes road trying to get ahold of where i left off c&c most appreciated

 

[CowgirlMama]

Looks pretty good to me. My main comment is that it's a bit too magenta... That shouldn't be difficult to fix, though.

 

[Derrel]

Vertical would have made this a nice portrait. As shot, her chin is at the bottom of the frame, and the top of her head is cut off. I do not mind the head chop as much as the chin almost at the bottom of the frame, and all the dead space on both sides of her face. I like the warm, magenta background you used--that looks lovely. She's a cute child. The lighting seems, well, a bit unorthodox...I see an under-chin shadow, and then I see a BIG catchlight very low in the eye, and then a pin-point catchlight...which adds up to a kind of unusual look to the eyes.

 

[The_Traveler]

Agree with Derrel.
It's hard to see any need for a landscape orientation here.
Lot's of waster space on either side and off-tint.

You would get more and better c/c if you allow editing.

 

[The_Traveler]

There's not a good way to create a neck but it's easy to show how removing the magenta cast improves the skin tone.
Nicely lit and sharp

 

[Snyder462]

oh wow yeah thats loads better thank you