my first digital pic any thoughts?

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i shot these out of my bedroom window. I know there nothing special I just wanted some feedback on adjustments I need 2 make or unmake. thanks for any feedback in advance. :thumbdown: :thumbup:
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Colors quite a bit crazy on both.

Second one, not too big of a fan. Very busy, but its a first shot so of course its going to be.
 

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not too bad for the first pic u took, the second one move that lamp out of the way.

the first one reminds me of this

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Looks like you have a good eye and can find subjects. Just the second one has too much clutter in the frame. With the bricks and the grass and the chainlink all going on, it's too busy.
 

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