My first sets with macro ring light, (large pictures) [please critique]

[tibrunner]

here are my first few pictures with a new ring light, please let me know what you think.

These first two I realize are a bit washed out and have too much of a yellow hue to them. anything else?

these are untouched straight from the camera

Thank you in advance for your comments

positive or negative, all critiques are welcome.

 

[Tomasko]

Love the pictures of eyes Macro ring light gave it a little sci-fi punch as well, so :thumbup: (1st picture could benefit from a little cropping though)
Don't like the second subject (3rd and 4th) to be honest, but hey, it's just my personal opinion

 

[tibrunner]

Love the pictures of eyes Macro ring light gave it a little sci-fi punch as well, so :thumbup: (1st picture could benefit from a little cropping though)
Don't like the second subject (3rd and 4th) to be honest, but hey, it's just my personal opinion

thank you very much, here is a cropped version with some tonal adjustments...what do you think? too much? also, I agree about the statue- it was the closest object to me that wasn't a plant or a Hilton coffee pot haha

 

[KAikens318]

I like the edit of the eye much better. Very cool. Make the eyes yellow and skin green....would look realllly sci-fi then hehe

 

[johnh2005]

Very cool effect. I like the eye shots as well. The statue was um... Move along... And yeah the edit was really nice. You could do some neat stuff in PP with that if you wanted to.

 

[Tomasko]

Yes, the cropped one is better Good job!

 

[D-B-J]

I really like the first one, so i gave it a shot to edit out the greenish/yellow hue, and a tighter crop.

Regards,
Jake

 

[MWG]

^ Thats awesome stuff there.

 

[tibrunner]

I like the edit of the eye much better. Very cool. Make the eyes yellow and skin green....would look realllly sci-fi then hehe

here you go, kinda Hulk-ish....sorry for the cheesy chop didn't put much effort just wanted a quick idea. ... yellow or green?

D-B-J that looks awesome, thank you!!

 

[D-B-J]

I like the edit of the eye much better. Very cool. Make the eyes yellow and skin green....would look realllly sci-fi then hehe

here you go, kinda Hulk-ish....sorry for the cheesy chop didn't put much effort just wanted a quick idea. ... yellow or green?

D-B-J that looks awesome, thank you!!

You are quite welcome