The picture is soft / out of focus. A main thing to do when doing portraits is getting the eyes crips and clear, and they are not in this picture. Make sure you have her eyes as the main focus point when taking the picture.
Great natural looking smile and I like the pose
There is some arm,skin,finger on the right hand side of the image that is very distracting
yup, you're right hah
thanks for the feedback - to be truthful, i was pretttty intoxicated whislt taking this pic as i was at my gf's stagette.. so i was pretty happy i got her at all lol.
i was using my 50mm f/1.2 - it's funny, i just love that lens, but sometimes, especially in lighting like this, it is SO hard to focus on the right spot.
thanks for the feedback - for sure some stuff to work on