My girlfriend

[Bibos]

Hi, after looking through a few of the photos I did on our holiday in Greece in August this year I decided to post two I like pretty much. Comments and critique very much appreciated.

 

[jocose]

Umm, well, my comment is this: When y'all break up, can you give her my number?


I do like the angle in the first pic, BTW.

 

[Christie Photo]

Hi, Bibos.

I'll offer one thought from a "portrait" perspective: When I view the first image, my eye doesn't know where to go. The shear size and color of the ATV overwhelms your subject. It's a great prop, though. Have you tried bringing down the tones of the lower 2/3 of the composition? I think it may help guide the viewers attention to your very lovely girfriend's face.

I think there's a bit of the same concern in the second image too. Maybe a vignette would work here. Just a thought.

Beautiful girls in Austria, I see.

Pete

 

[photoboy15]

I agree with Christie, the first photo would look much better if you cropped it just under the head light.

 

[Megip]

Good stomach! Nice holiday snaps.

Where about's in Greece did you go?

 

[bace]

I'd hit it.

 

[photogoddess]

I'd hit it.

 

[terri]

I'd hit it.

 

[JonMikal]

I'd hit it.

very inappropriate comment!

 

[Taralyn Romero]

I thought we were supposed to be commenting on PHOTOS here.....

 

[Artemis]

Very beautiful, shots and girlfriend, well done

 

[bace]

So whoever gave me the negative rep point on this thing, I hope they gave one to Jocose too.

We said the same thing I just used less words.

My comment was totally meant as a compliment.

The girl is gorgeous. Bibos is a lucky dude.

 

[Chase]

Bace, I'm not trying to be an ass here, but seriously, if you had said it that way, you would have seen a very different response to you post.

 

[Bibos]

Thanks for all the compliments They were forwarded and well received (At least the appropriate ones *g*)

@Christie: thanks for your tips, I will try the vignette, I think that's a great idea.

 

[bace]

Bace, I'm not trying to be an ass here, but seriously, if you had said it that way, you would have seen a very different response to you post.

I may be rough around the edges but my intentions are good.