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[dynamic03]

Let me know what you guys think.

 

[NayLoMo6C]

She's real pretty

I would crop the right side out a bit so the black bar on the top right corner can be gone. Maybe crop the top off a bit too so that black thing on top of her head can go away too

 

[dynamic03]

She's real pretty

I would crop the right side out a bit so the black bar on the top right corner can be gone. Maybe crop the top off a bit too so that black thing on top of her head can go away too

I see what you mean, good points!

 

[The_Traveler]

She's beautiful, nicely posed
Very nice interesting OOF grill

but
It is overexposed, her face has little tone and color, she has a wooden rail going through her head and the stairs are very obvious.

you have a beautiful model, a good eye for design, reshoot this in better circumstances.

Lew

 

[Conner41]

It's a little distracting with the black thing going across her neck.