My little man, 2 for C&C please

[Jifferz]

I know I accidently cut off some appendages but other than that, how does everything else look....exposure, focus etc? And is it just me or does in #2, his head look too big for his body? Thanks!

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[DanFinePhotography]

yes, you might try to use a little less wide angle. The exposure looks pretty sweet however

 

[Jifferz]

Thanks for your feedback DanFine, I appreciate it.
I shot these at f8, which I thought would work but I guess because his body extends behind him at an angle, it makes it look off.

Anyone else have any CC on these?

 

[Derrel]

These look a bit underexposed to me. I agree too that a slightly longer focal length would make him look better.

 

[mwcfarms]

Im with Derrell both look underexposed.