myFirst shots

[bolla40]

hi,, this is first topic ..
i've just began photographing for 2 weeks !








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[bolla40]

w8ing ur feedback..

 

[TWright33]

k33p wateeng

 

[mmaria]

are you looking for critique or just sharing? do you want anything specific for us to answer you?

 

[bolla40]

are you looking for critique or just sharing? do you want anything specific for us to answer you?

critique ^_^

 

[mmaria]

#1 the subject is out of focus
#2 and #3 one of them is again oof, and the message is not clear. what did you want to say with these pictures?
#4 cute I guess... I don't know, maybe if I was younger I would like this
#5 the best out of the batch, good angle, ok composition but watch for your background
#6 light light and learn more about light

 

[bolla40]

#1 the subject is out of focus #2 and #3 one of them is again oof, and the message is not clear. what did you want to say with these pictures? #4 cute I guess... I don't know, maybe if I was younger I would like this #5 the best out of the batch, good angle, ok composition but watch for your background #6 light light and learn more about light

thank u .. i'm trying improve my work !
#1 .. the object was out of focus as i was very close of it .. [very tiny] i used zoom in but it was also small .. so i was very clos so it was blurred
#2..#3 .. haven't no idea ..
#6 .. i took this photo in kitchen without any lighting except the lamp .. really i was playing
generally i've started photographing for 2 weeks only !

 

[mmaria]

- think about what you want to capture? what is it that you want to tell people with your picture?
- read about focus and recomposing
- composition. light later
- keep it simple for now. read and practice a lot, we'll help

 

[Steve5D]

Don't fall into the trap of believing that every picture you take needs to "say" something.

Sometimes a good picture is just a good picture, even when it keeps its mouth shut...

 

[bolla40]

- think about what you want to capture? what is it that you want to tell people with your picture?
- read about focus and recomposing
- composition. light later
- keep it simple for now. read and practice a lot, we'll help

thank u i'll try

 

[bolla40]

Don't fall into the trap of believing that every picture you take needs to "say" something.

Sometimes a good picture is just a good picture, even when it keeps its mouth shut...

thank you
really i take many pictures .. but at last i delete them as it have no idea
but they were very beautiful