Natalie Shoot

[boomer]

I haven't posted any pictures here in a while, so I figured I would put some up. I've been doing a decent amount of family shoots lately but really enjoy modeling shoots for fun. I was pretty happy with the way this shoot turned out last week! All were shot with my 85mm f1.4G

Always appreciate any C&C you have too!

Thanks!

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Natalie B. Shoot (12 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

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Natalie B. Shoot (14 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

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Natalie B. Shoot (29 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

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Natalie B. Shoot (22 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

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Natalie B. Shoot (32 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

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Natalie B. Shoot (19 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

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Natalie B. Shoot (42 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

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Natalie B. Shoot (46 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

 

[tirediron]

Nice series; well done ('though I think the pose in #5 is a bit 'awkward' for a young lady).

 

[Benjo255]

N. 3, 6 and 7. They're just...stunning! Super!
N. 3: light, crop, alignement and her expression are perfect to me.
N. 6: sweet expression, perfect focus, lovely pose, she just jump out of the screen.
N. 7: perfect DOF, wonderful use of lines.

According to me, you really made a great job. You managed to bring us her innocent and sweet beauty.

I don't like the others:
1&2: these don't tell a storu and those glasses are ugly. I'm not able to appreciate them.
4: Not a natural pose and I wouldn't have cropped the feet.
5. Despite she has beautiful legs and the pose bring the eyes...there...well...something's wrong with perspective and she seems to have smaller legs.
8. She's more confident here but the pic doesn't tell me a magic story like the others.

 

[boomer]

Nice series; well done ('though I think the pose in #5 is a bit 'awkward' for a young lady).

Thanks! I can't completely disagree there. Although, I can tell by her style when shooting, she likes to be a little more showy if you know what I mean lol

N. 3, 6 and 7. They're just...stunning! Super!
N. 3: light, crop, alignement and her expression are perfect to me.
N. 6: sweet expression, perfect focus, lovely pose, she just jump out of the screen.
N. 7: perfect DOF, wonderful use of lines.

According to me, you really made a great job. You managed to bring us her innocent and sweet beauty.

I don't like the others:
1&2: these don't tell a storu and those glasses are ugly. I'm not able to appreciate them.
4: Not a natural pose and I wouldn't have cropped the feet.
5. Despite she has beautiful legs and the pose bring the eyes...there...well...something's wrong with perspective and she seems to have smaller legs.
8. She's more confident here but the pic doesn't tell me a magic story like the others.

Great feedback! Thank you.

I may have a few corrections for some of them.

1.
While still could be considered a slightly 'awkard' pose, I think it may be better than the #5 from the first set.
Natalie B. Shoot (30 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

2.
Better pose that #4 from the first set
Natalie B. Shoot (24 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

3.
A little different angle and pose compared to #8 from the first set
Natalie B. Shoot (45 of 59) by Jim Boomer Photography, on Flickr

 

[Braineack]

nice set! i agree #5 should go away. maybe try a crop, cause it was great until i kept scrolling down.

 

[Guiille93]

I think 3 and 7 are the strongest of the set. I would suggest keeping your lines straight, for me dutch angles feel akward

 

[FITBMX]

#6 & #7 Are the best of the set for me. But the whole set is very strong!!!

 

[JoeW]

N. 3, 6 and 7. They're just...stunning! Super!
N. 3: light, crop, alignement and her expression are perfect to me.
N. 6: sweet expression, perfect focus, lovely pose, she just jump out of the screen.
N. 7: perfect DOF, wonderful use of lines.

According to me, you really made a great job. You managed to bring us her innocent and sweet beauty.

I don't like the others:
1&2: these don't tell a storu and those glasses are ugly. I'm not able to appreciate them.
4: Not a natural pose and I wouldn't have cropped the feet.
5. Despite she has beautiful legs and the pose bring the eyes...there...well...something's wrong with perspective and she seems to have smaller legs.
8. She's more confident here but the pic doesn't tell me a magic story like the others.

Pretty much summarizes my thoughts as well. For #5, one of the issues is that a thin model, when her leg is straight on to the camera, will look like she has stick legs. You need to point her toes in a different direction (to show some calf) or put her on her toes (which will tighten her calf muscles and show some definition). #7 is outstanding.