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My only serious feedback would be that you are using very cold colors. Granted they match the photo but babies are more associated with warm colors.
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The right aligned "A Workshop by Amber Rust" is throwing me off. If it were me I would center it above the lunch announcement and give yourself a little bit of space below it or find a way to work it new to your Newborn Photography headline.
Like: NEWBORN PHOTOGRAPHY | A Workshop by Amber Rust
Or something...doesn't look bad overall, just a small nitpick on my part.
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Larger then my last edit, or just larger than the original post? I don't know if I've got room for a bigger baby on the last draft.
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I like the idea of warmer colors, I think it would be better to grab a baby on a warmer colored set. That edit baby looks a little.... jaundiced.
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My concern about workshops is demonstrating in not all, but some of the photos, positions being used that appear as if they may not be consistent with what's considered appropriate for newborns.
Having been an early intervention specialist, if I'd walked into a home visit with a family and saw a baby positioned in some of the ways being used in baby photography, I would have had to intervene.
To do workshops it might be worth taking a look at some websites done by professional organizations related to infant development. The tight wrapping/binding with gauzy fabric could be a concern since it should be loose enough to allow movement.
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Having been an early intervention specialist, if I'd walked into a home visit with a family and saw a baby positioned in some of the ways being used in baby photography, I would have had to intervene.
To do workshops it might be worth taking a look at some websites done by professional organizations related to infant development. The tight wrapping/binding with gauzy fabric could be a concern since it should be loose enough to allow movement.
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im PALS, NRP and STABLE certified.
we can combine forces and teach a infant photography and neonatal resuscitation class!
you might have to charge a little more though...
love runnah's edit btw.
we can combine forces and teach a infant photography and neonatal resuscitation class!
you might have to charge a little more though...
love runnah's edit btw.
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I love the image! Very nice. The secondary font is also nice, but the title font really isn't my cup of tea. I would try something like Bebas Neue or Ostrich Sans. Perhaps Marzo. Those are my two go-to font choices.
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