damian_i15
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- Oct 29, 2007
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- Cape Coral, FL
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Hi can I get some feedback on the following pictures:
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What could be more interesting than the sloping lake in #12? It's not quite enough of a slope for waterskiing, but it could be fun in a raft.
1: the bars just take too much from the waterfall
2: interesting, but I'd have played with the angles a bit more; somewhere, that tree's got a better shot waiting
3: not enough to be a full cityscape, too much to focus on any specific section - back up or zoom in to give it a specific subject
4: similar to 3; pick one, or back out to show the whole flock
5: more or less angle - right now it just looks like you missed level, and the powerline centered at the top is a bit of a distraction
6: a bit hard to recognise for a second - not necessarily too bad from an artistic standpoint, but hard to say what you were going for
7: interesting tree, but the foreground and background objects are distracting - this would be a good place to look for an angle with clear foreground, and play with DOF to blur the background
8: I like it overall, but this would be a good example of a place to get the horizon about 1/3 of the way from the bottom rather than centered, cutting out some excess sidewalk and possibly improving the effect a bit as well
9,10,11: that distortion is distracting - move back and zoom in
12: I like the tree, but lakes are generally level
13: this is one of those cases where soft light (overcast) would probably be a better choice - the tree-tunnel loses some power to all that happy sunlight