Needing C&C please!

[qsfarmer]

 

[adversus]

1. Her face looks soft, looks like missed the focus

2. The wall is hugely distracting, it's a nice contrast with her shirt/pants but just too damn bright to me

I personally like the pose though. Good lookin' lady

 

[alwaysbored786]

would have looked much nicer if you included the rest of the door there. Were you using a tripod? 160mm seems like you were shooting too far away, handheld i presume?

Not sure if you have VR on, but it would have helped keeping the face a bit sharper. Her body sort of blends in with the brick, i would work on composure, other than that, i like it!

 

[qsfarmer]

I was actually hand held.. and my Vr was on.. I ws trying to shoot in between cars and touristthis was shot in Jerome AZ spur of the moment

 

[thingsIsee]

Her shin and the wall blend in to each other too much, her right arm is missing from the image. The pose is ok, but looks a little strand like she is trying not to fall.
The door might have been a better back drop.