The brightest part of the photo will always draw attention.
In this case, the rather unpleasant highlights in the background dominate the composition.
Not sure that was the effect you were going for.
And yes, processing is not really working here either. The edge vignetting and what appears to be over-sharpening is not helpful.
Don't be discouraged though. Keep trying. The learning curve is steep, but the payback is worth the time.