New beginning C&C

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[KmH]

Good concept, but harsh light. Pop-up flash?

 

[Kcc]

Nothing pops out to my thought, did you try lower your ISO to 200 or 100 instead of 400 and use a longer exposure? Freezing the movement of the clay spinning might look different from capturing it unfreeze. Flash could be soften abit with a tissue and cut out the northeast corner of the DOF.

Kcc